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.:The Dead Girl Epilogue:. by Aelathen .:The Dead Girl Epilogue:. by Aelathen
I am Ghost-The Dead Girl Epilogue
Soon the rain will wash away the sun
As I melt with you
I am ghost
Isn't this what you dreamed about
Isn't this what you bleed about
Taste from my lips and tongue
Kissed
Don't get me sketched for seconds
There's seconds left
Like snowflakes in a glass of mist
Isn't this what you dreamed about


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The Dead Girl´s Epilogue Part II


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This is a beautiful pair of pictures, hidden by each other. The immediate impact of realising that both pictures exist simultaneously is massive. Then there are further questions, such as whether they are two stages of one story, or two possible choices in the future, or one imagining the other. It is creepy and depressing at the same time as it is amazing, and I salute any artist who can pull this off.

It is difficult to critique a painting that keeps changing focus, so the easy parts first: the limited cool-colour palette and dim tones are well suited to the subject matter. The strong verticals compliment the noose/swing. The cloth is well produced.

If I have a couple of niggles, they would be that the highlights on the trees just to the left of the body bring them forward a little too far compared to their bases, and that the bottoms of the cloth might do better to have the ragged bits receding and the hemmed part coming forward. The hair, very difficult to perform at two sizes, does not entirely work for me, but I suspect this is in part because I cannot focus on it well enough. In the hanged-girl it looks a little too line-art for my taste, but frankly I do not know of how it could be improved without altering it for the lady on the swing. I am not sure it should be altered, only sure that it makes it difficult for me to focus on one figure at a time.

I was very close to giving this full marks, but tiny tiny things prevented me from doing it. This is more a reflection on the critic than on the art. It is awesome, and I am glad that it exists in the world.
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teampikachu9945 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2016  Student Digital Artist
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room
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:iconmysticallyartisticme:
Wow....
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:iconmatrixoforchidstripe:
MatrixofOrchidstripe Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Simply beautiful. Mere words cannot describe your talent. Most people think Death is a horrid part of life, but in this masterpeice, you can prove that Death is beautiful, and even graceful. I will always looove your artwork and I am glad you are posting again, even though this art is not relatively new. Keep creating true masterpeices! :la:
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KenichiOtaku Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
This,.... you........I.........
This is speechless.
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:iconinkyvampire:
InkyVampire Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
You are gifted.
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:iconbluejay1995:
bluejay1995 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This has no words to describe how amazing it is.
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Pewitt0Jack Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Professional General Artist
how do you do it?
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:iconeddyrichie:
EddyRichie Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow ! I love it ! How did You do this effect.. ? It looks like a paint, a drawing, this is beautiful, I'd love to learn how to do this ! (Sorry about my english, I'm french)
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Aelathen Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awwwwwwwwww thank you!!! And dont worry your english is very good :aww:!!!.
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magicminnie13 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Student
This looks really awesome but for the life of me I can not see the hanged girl. All I see is a girl on a swing but according to the critique there's a hanged girl too.
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ABA999 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
wow,this is breathtaking! so beautiful, really well done!
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GokuMartin Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012
There's a ghost down in the hall
There's a ghoul upon the bed
There's something in the walls
There's blood up on the stairs
And it's floating through the room
And there's nothing I can see
And I know that that's the truth
Because now it's onto me

I don't understand it
Hey
I don't understand it!
Aaow

There's a tappin' in the floor
There's a creak behind the door
There's a rocking in the chair
But there's no-one sitting there
There's a ghostly smell around
But nobody to be found
And a coughin' and a yawnin'
Where a restless soul is going

Don't understand it
Hey!
Don't understand it
Hey.

And who gave you the right to shake my family?
And who gave you the right to shake my baby, she needs me
And who gave you the right to shake my family tree?
You put a knife in my back
Shot an arrow in me!
Tell me are you the ghost of jealousy
The ghost of jealousy

There's a tappin in the floor
There's a creak behind the door
There's a rocking in the chair
But nobody's sitting there
There's a ghostly smell around
But nobody to be found
And a coughin' and a yawnin'
Where a restless soul is going

Don't understand it!
Yeah Yeah!
Don't understand it!
Your just a dog gone!
Aaow!

And who gave you the right to scare my family?
And who gave you the right to scare my baby, she needs me
And who gave you the right to shake my family tree?
And who gave you the right to take intrusion, to see me?
And who gave you the right to shake my family?
And who gave you the right to hurt my baby, she needs me
And who gave you the right to shake my family tree?
You put a knife in my back,
Shot an arrow in me!
Tell me are you the ghost of jealousy
A suckin' ghost of jealousy
Aaow!

And who gave you the right to shake my family?
And who gave you the right to shake my baby, she needs me
And who gave you the right to shake my family tree?
And who gave you the right to take, intrusion to see me?
And who gave you the right to hurt my family?
And who gave you the right hurt my baby, she needs me
And who gave you the right to shake my family tree?
You put a knife in my back
Shot an arrow in me!
Tell me are you the ghost of jealousy
The ghost of jealousy

Aaow
Dog gone
But there's no doubt about it, piece of mind
Tell me are you the ghost of jealousy
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WhimsicalRoses Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
And I thought I loved you before...to know that you're a fan of I Am Ghost as well? That just blew my mind. I adore everything you do!
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sasukeluvsmemore Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
gorgeous!!!
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RejectxDrifter Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
love this!
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HeonGaiden Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice work.
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:iconaelathen:
Aelathen Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you!
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ItsAnniPauEditions Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks used on:[link]
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:iconnatalevi:
Natalevi Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Professional General Artist
This is how my friend ivy died..
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Karma-Manipulation Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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paupernada Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
..seeing your works really amazed me...i lurrvee it you rock!!
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VincentiusSs Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012
lovely.
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:iconaelathen:
Aelathen Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you!
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VincentiusSs Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012
no prob ;)
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duppik Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
just great work ^^
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:iconaelathen:
Aelathen Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you!
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Le-Regard-des-Elfes Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2012   Digital Artist
Your beautiful work has been featured here: [link]
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:iconiamdragonandalsomina:
Whoa...beautiful...how'd she die?
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toonmaker Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011
really awesome.... super emotional pic !
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:iconaelathen:
Aelathen Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you!
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toonmaker Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012
your welcome! :D
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Popinq Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Omg you're so good at hair. Do you have a hair tutorial?
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Sese-omnes-amant Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011
beautiful
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milka94 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011
Can I use your arts on blog? I put address to you.
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:iconaelathen:
Aelathen Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes you can :aww:.
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cozajrox Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
[link]
used it here .. sorry for not asking first
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Maggeena Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautiful! Can I use it in my blog (actually, no much people read it) I would say you're the author and put the link.
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Maggeena Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautiful! Can I use it in my blog (actually, no much people read it) I would say you're the author and put the link.
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Aelathen Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes of course :aww:.
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SerenatoVII Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Hobbyist
haunting and gorgeous!!! :blackrose: It's beautiful
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IreneUbik Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011   Digital Artist
I like this.
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Ulvkatt Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
wow, I love that song :) And your picture is AWESOME
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6NAKED6AMBITION6 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011
AMAZING WORK,CAN'T WAIT TO LOOK AT MORE OF IT!
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RehNahvah Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011
Well I don't have time to be as precise and diana there but I love both of them.
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Sesshoumaru1979 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011
That is beautiful
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finn1123 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I love that song! Cool picture too :)
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1Lonewolf1975 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011
oh my god....how the hell did you manage to fully "copy" the original pic and then make it like that one?? damn that impressed me! the picture has "sad" and "aftrethoughts" written all over it....wonderful and so expressive!
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Aelathen Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much!! :love I used Photoshop for it :love:!
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DkIgthorn Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2011
Soulful and delicate. Absolutely lovely!
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